Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Tuesday, August 24, 2021
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Oh I love it Felix!! It is definitely a feast for the eyes. What a fantastic DLO you have presented, it made me smile. Great idea to pick an Acrostic Poem for your spring poem. I really like the word Refreshed for the letter R, it is absolutely what spring feels like to me. What is going to inspire you next to complete and post on your blog I wonder?:)
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Well done Felix! Your presentation of the poem reflects spring with the tones of green and yellow. I enjoy the inclusion of daffodils, they are one of my favourite flowers and mark that spring is finally arriving. I really like that you included underneath your poem that you were inspired by bees, flowers and sunshine - which are all represented within the poem.
ReplyDeleteI'm excited to watch your blog evolve and see what other activities you choose to post about
Hi Felix
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog post because Spring is my favourite season and I like how you put bees with honey all around your blog post and I have a question why were you inspired by bees,flowers and sunshine?
Vivienne